woot woot
glad u finished and posted it
youre getting better and better
the ear looks a wee bit small
anatomy is a-ok appart from that
shading ooks great, u got some parts down great

what you need to keep in mind is to shade softly..its a bit rugged on the face, and the lines are too proeminent,...and it has to fade-out without seeing outlines

you get max score because of the huuuge progress you're making
keep it going

as you thought the hand is really well drawen
basicly its a good drawing, but her mouth doesnt work for me...it doesnt seem sexy as it dshould have been

+10

The lips remind me of Botox ! in some ways that can be sexy !!!
well done.......

.. does "sexy" matter so much? LOL..

Very nice! You have done a lot of progress.

Here a lil crit, i am looking at her and i see you have put more of ur time on the hand creation, lips, nose and shading, why i say that, this is because these part's incorporate all well together and the other part look a bit rush,
The eye's and eyebrow look good but there look a lil to much Dark IMO.

I sugest you to use softer pencil at the first start ; like 6H after 5H, 4H, 3H,2H ,F, HB, i know that look a bit long to do, but that make a good result and all part will have the same tone of shade, then after finish with HB&B pencil for made some contrast , you can use to a ''Stump'' or ur ' Finger' at the end for softer all the shade.

Here maibe you will like this way, this is the way i was use for make line in the past i'm not a pro and never go in a school for this so i was needed to create
my own tecknique maibe i'm wrong but there the way i was use.

''Never do a line'' what i mean when you do eye don't do the line for make the form, use the same teck as shading, a lot of lil line for make one line line 'form', yeah i know my teck look a bit weird and is a long way to do, but at the end i'm sure if u try you will maibe like.
Anyway wish that help you a lil.
Keep it up, you are great for only 13 year old.
Sorry for my english

Well that was ahuge comment lol..Thanks.. I halfy understood that .Thank you.. And thats okay..

Well i'll be 14 this year so soon you'll have to say great for a 14 year old hahe!!.. or does that mena i'm not so fabulous anymore hahe..anywayz..Thanks soooo much

i like it!
you have a great future! +9

nice work, only problem when i see it is the ear, its too small.

you develop your skill to drawing, that´s great.
here some things to check after see the reference:
eyebrow separation. and angle of the right one.
rigth eye size and shape.
ear size and shape.

the hand work it´s great that is what make me think that you can work on those litle details enumerated before
i´m sorry if my critics are a litle bother, but i relly think that you have very much potential for drawing.

Beautiful work... I think everything been already said...again.......
Well done

Nice work, the frame is distracting though. You're improving a lot! The shading is nice, the eye and ear could use some more work though (the ear is too small)
If you're that good at 13, I wonder what you'll do in some years!
+9

Very well done!
I think you're done the nose the best, especially on the bridge (shading)
The anotomy is very well done.
I suggest you do an eye study. Draw only eyes, and lot's of them.
It will do you good (I should do it too I think). ow, and the eyebrow, you drew like vertical stripes... try and go with direction of the hair.

The arm and the ear look like they had less attention then the rest of your drawing. Maybe you could work on that a bit more. It will be more in balance then.

enough crits = +7/8

i like it alot...keep at it.

Lol... that picture is actually in my wallpapers folder. Kate is a very beautiful woman.

Nice impression! +8/8

• Lair.

Flaws are pretty much mentioned.. Beauty indeed
+8

WWWAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOWWW

go raechel!!!
yey!!! my maxx!!
+8!!!

wonderful, sorry i missed this and didn't comment until now, fun to watch your grow, your a star in the making....

Nice work.

Hee hee, star in the making..
thanks everyone for Commenting!!!!!!..and voting

just a lill problem in the ear everything else is fine gr8 work +9

I can't say a thing to add to this.
Plus I totally love Kate -- so you get full marks just for that!

Hey v.

finally i have some time to ge4t online again, so here is my crit..............

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
spoton girl spoton, amazing work love it max vote from me 9/9

very well done maybe you should think aboout aquarell pencils for a new artwork ^^

wel cya

Very talented ... +5 .. i f ihad 10 i would give it all

Well I think everyone pretty much said it all, I say its great, she is such a beautiful woman !

I like this piece of yours more than the others. I think it is more right in anatomy, and the expression looks alive. Very good work. I agree with Diane, if you are 13-14 year old now and you draw like this... wow...

good work girl

That;s gorgeous!