Wow ! .. The pic itself could use some refining as far as it being dark and stuff ..just cleaning up in photoshop or whatever .. but the ddrawing is very good YOu did a lovley job on the hair and the body .. and he pose is very natural .. Great job my dear

wow you picked a tricky pose to copy, a strong attempt, I'm going to say that I know you already know the areas to push on this, but I can see you are getting more confident in you subjects

Very well done, very good to see you prggress even more,

• try to make more differnce in the lines between thick ans thin lines

especially in the hands

other than that very well done

8/9 vote

Hey venom

You did very well! The compostition is very good, I don't see any flauts!
So, now this is good, maybe you can focus on the shading. I'll give you and example: underneath her arm there is shade, but it's quite hard, it looks more like a black spot. Try and do shade more light.

+7/8

NIce work venom I have some crits though : the hand is way too small compared to the head, the top of her head looks very large due to the hair, her arm looks a little bit small.... You should use only grey values to draw a character and get rid of the lines if you're going for a realistic look It's pretty well drawn for a young girl like you!!!
+8 keep it up

well you have chosen a litle more complex model to draw.
that´s good because it put you in more trouble then your usual drawings, i mean there is a lot more to learn here.
the hand it´s too small, you can work it out making the hole structure drawing first, paying attention to proportions and pose. after that you go in details and shadows (i say this like if it is easy, im steel trying make it right LOL).
anyway this is a very interesting work and i think you are going to get beter and beter!

Excelent!
I can't really add anything to what has allready been said...
So- whatever they said, I agree with them

nice drawing i would agree with Diane on this one
keep it up

Ana

Use a sharp/mechanical pencil to define your lines a bit more, and a kneaded eraser works great to pick up any extra smudges. I agree- she looks very relaxed and natural.

Very nice! Getting better every time. Listen what they say to you, I mean those excellent drawers... +8

Ooooooww well i thought you meant the voices joking..LOL!..
I know i'm listening

Thanks Umanth

You are very talented Venom, IF that is your real name
You will be a very talented artist if you keep this up!
+8

very good pencils. i would add a little more curve to her but other than that. ilike it. i think i like the eyes the most they have a sort of innocents to them

EXELLENT DRAWING piece of sh*t movie

LOL!!! piece of Sh!t movie.. thats funny lol

nice work with the everything in this one, looks just like the picture !