I like the imagination on this, using a grayscale as a base, and eyes in color as a focal point. You used a photo as a reference but made it your own. Well done. I think your only going to get better and better with time.

I love it, though I would like to see more nuances in the white to black. It looks great. My only crit is that the face is too small on the head. Try to find a tutorial about basic head drawing

+7/8

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Venom this is the most promosing work intill now form you...really great

minor crits are the teeth how seem flat and out of place and the left eye seems to be turned to much to the right, too far behind the nose.....

7/8 vote very well done

Hi venomsblood, I'm going to give you my max because of the progress you've made...keep them coming!

+10

deankuhta is right, you made a big progress!

agree about the progress, you have a very interesting future!!!!

keep them coming!

i like this; her round, full face is unexpected in a vampire, yet i think it gives her great character. The left eye is slanted downwards too much, but other than that, great work!

dude...u vampirized Dido!!!!lmao thats sick
is britney next?(muahahaaaa)

im notgonna say anything about progress, youve done that every time u post somethin new
again. me hates your scanner
i have an idea
i believe you have a digital camera...i'd suggest taking a clean photo of the drawing with it and pm it to me
that way i can see more shading and stuff
facial features....allignment..u got that out pretty well, only small glitch is her left eye, its a bit too much leaned downwards
you could make some grids and allign the nose,eyes and mouth to it so as to avoid that, but watch out for perspective
her teeth are maybe too sharp and rectangular, she looks a bit nerdy too(dont hit me))
at the hair you actually did do a better job than before....only thing you need is some reflections....for that, as i said before, you need to blacken the base of the hair and the top....look closely at the image and see
to me the nose is a bit small..i suggest taking your penci8l before you start, drawing the grids, and then with the pencil, taking some basic proportions
for example, take the face width and see how many times an eye fits into it and then make it accordingly, or take the nose and compare it with the forehead etc
the idea is to get each element in relationship with a central one...its up to you which one you will choose
but dont forget that you dont have to measure only the nose mouth etc, but also how long the nose is, how big is the mouth, how high are the brows and forehead stuff like that

again, im writting a mega commenti missed one actually

you nailed her expression very well....thats probably the best thing here...anyway thats the one i like most

what can i say, this one is a huge leap from the others
i'm waiting for the britney vampire version(jk)

and i'm appologising from now if i wont write comments so fast because i'm a bit busy as well...but dont worry, you wont get away from me that easily

Oo britney style woo woo!!... You know i tihnk i may just do that and dedicate it to you lol ...

U INSPIRED ME thank you, now maybe ill get off my a** and do sum drawing lol.

Lol, GREAT! i inspired an idiot lol ... just kiddin' ..
Well thats nice that i inspired you i guess.. Good Luck! with it Nilesh!

nice style, whatever the imperfections, that's what it makes it stand out

Good drawing for your age.
well done!

After Brittney please do Paris Hilton HaHa!
on http//:www.saveloomis.org there is a lot of information on drawing which could be interesting for you.
Keep it up!
Erik

LOL.. Paris hilton .. freaky

Thanks

hehe nice one funny comments above too

a vamped out dido very funny, I like her alot.. nice to have only her eyes colored make them really stand out.