This comes off as a very gray piece. When I look at a piece of clear glasswear, I see a full spectrum of tones from bright white to deep gray-black. I also get a myriad of reflections from adjacent objects, lending their shapes and colors to the light playing across the surface.

This is a good start, but you need to refine. Look for that white point, define a black point, and really take a good look at what is there, and not what you think is there.

Also, pay attention to the marks you use to render shapes and textures. You have some very linear hatch marks in the glass, and while they do indicate a certain contour, they make the viewer think more of something rough and textural. Glass is smooth and mirrorlike. Make your strokes smooth and mirrorlike as well.

Keep drawing. Practice is the best teacher!

Thanks

very soft drawing, only one thing to warn you of, and you'll hear it a lot from people or see on others works, not to make the name of the artwork so large, and your signature that it takes attention away from what you are trying to show. A good start. Happy to see your posts.

thanks SeeThrou for looking, commenting and giving me some advice appreciate the time

draw glass stuff it´s a real exercise for develop of shadows and reflects. for that you need to use more levels of gray, and to be very mindfull for the shapes of those reflects. becouse there is nothing else, all that else it´s transparent, so, if there is somesing behind you have to see it.
(sorry about my relly basic and bad inglish, i want to be more accurate but cant in inglish)

anyway you have talent and i see a great future in your drawing.
keep it on.

Thanks greatly appreciated with your time and advice
You explained it quite well i may add
Thanks a heap! for your support also

Keep up the good work!! I agree with everything previously mentioned , have nothing more to add, besides the fact that you are doing a really good job ^^

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Nice try at still life, which can be tricky. Try to achive more volume by making your lights lighter and your darks darker. This will help bring out your object more.

Try doing the same on A3 or even A2 sized paper and with charcoal or conte crayons. You can use something like toiletpaper to smudge for a nice effect and hairspray to finish it.

I like this one very much. It's a very good technique, good practise.

+7/8

• Lair.

agree with lair but my advice is to start with as little shadow as possible so it does fill itself up so much to become blend and not 3d...needs just a tad of volume and light in it but very good attempt 6/8 vote

Thankssssss
(Lair^&^Jasper)

nice work perhaps the reflections are a bit too strong... other than that, good work!

Wow, they`re wonderful, congratulations.